Writing Question

***This is for a revision of a draft Supply Chain research paper***

Instructions

Task: Write a research paper using evidence to support a thesis that addresses your research question examining a current issue or event in the news from the perspective of your field of study. The audience is people who are generally educated but do not have extensive knowledge of your field.

Topic

This paper is the culmination of your research project, in which you are examining a current issue or event in the news from the perspective of your field of study. Before drafting your paper, you will have chosen a topic, developed a research question, and identified several potential sources in an annotated bibliography. You should write on the same topic for this paper, unless your professor has asked you to make changes to your topic.

Organizing and supporting your paper

As you write your paper, be sure to include the following:

• an engaging introductory paragraph that includes an effective and clear thesis statement
• any definition of terms or background information that your reader is likely to need to understand your paper
• unified, supported, and coherent body paragraphs that defend the thesis
• an effective conclusion

Research is a key element of this paper. Take care to support your claims with research throughout the paper. Include APA in-text citations whenever you use sources, whether through quote, paraphrase, or summary. An APA reference list at the end of the paper should list all of the sources cited in the text of the paper.

Point of view

This paper will be written in an academic style. Use third person point of view. Do not use “I” or “you.”

Formatting your assignment

Incorporate these elements of APA style:

• Use one-inch margins.
• Double space.
• Use an easy-to-read font between 10-point and 12-point.
• Include a title page with the title of your paper, your name, and the name of your school

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What is required:

1. Read the feed back and adjust the reach paper, feed back is below:

Ricky, you have some good things and some areas of opportunity. The structure you use here is not a good one for an argumentative essay. You include a lot of unnecessary information, which serves as several diversions for the audience. The essay needs to focus on the argument and the proof to support it. Also, each paragraph should have at least five sentences. Please review the attached document on a laptop or pc to see my specific comments.

2. Please see research paper in the attachments and all the adjustments that are located on the right side of the paper.