Please try your best to sharpen the theoretical framework (which may become a chapter of its own instead of chapter two):
What is the relationship between the presence of foreign forces and brain development?
How is this connected, why should there be a brain drain and who should be affected?
It is very vital to connect the causal relations in between and develop a theory to base some serious analysis on this issue.
2. Create at least 6 evaluation Questions that critically scrutinise the effects of western withdrawal on Brain-Drain in Afghanistan.
Note: Please, do not write it on separate pages but incorporate you’re edition and corrections, within the same document and highlight them in yellow to make it easy for me to grasp what your new ideas and contributions are.
Time to see the difference between your mastery and PhD levels services:).